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Stars glittered the sky. The sliver of the moon hanging high in the deep blue heavens. Only a light breeze flowing through the tall grass. Just two small children, the movement in the field. Their small imprints in the grass, the only change. Fireflies and their moon, their only guide.

"Life is meant to be more than this," she whispers...



"let's go find it."

Running through the grass makes no sound. They are off to find their adventures…
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I don't really remember writing this..

it's cute :]

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*AlexanderSteele Oct 7, 2009, 7:15:28 PM
It's absolutely adorable. [: I notice a few grammar things, but with this being so poetic in style they may or may not be important. I like it, the imagery is rich. :heart:

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"I suggest we learn to love ourselves before it's made illegal."

-Incubus
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~the-depth-of-love Oct 7, 2009, 7:19:26 PM
thank you! <3

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"If I did my tricks with smoke and mirrors, would you still know which one was me?"
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*PendulousRose Oct 10, 2009, 11:58:01 PM
Awww! This is adorable! It just took me back to a memory of when my sister and I were running in the dark trying to capture caterpillars so that we could see them turn into butterflies. ^^ I loved this! <3

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=HtBlack Oct 17, 2009, 1:02:18 PM
I only have love to say of this. I am enchanted by the words of the children. Such sweet truth hidden in them. :heart:

A well deserved favourite, it inspired me! :)

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"Your Orwellian language notwithstanding- it's a fucking machine. It's a tool."

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I'm an admin for #theWrittenRevolution .
The words are the spark.
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~the-depth-of-love Oct 19, 2009, 2:52:04 PM
thank you very much! :)

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"If I did my tricks with smoke and mirrors, would you still know which one was me?"
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~the-depth-of-love Oct 19, 2009, 2:52:30 PM
Thanks. I was/am enchanted by fireflies. <3

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"If I did my tricks with smoke and mirrors, would you still know which one was me?"
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=HtBlack Oct 20, 2009, 6:01:43 AM
:hug: thank you for this work. :)

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"Your Orwellian language notwithstanding- it's a fucking machine. It's a tool."

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I'm an admin for #theWrittenRevolution .
The words are the spark.
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*PendulousRose Nov 8, 2009, 1:50:27 AM
Fireflies are pretty-- I actually haven't seen them here... :(

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~paleanticipation Dec 14, 2009, 12:49:47 AM
I love fireflies! <3 Five years ago my best friend and I were coming home from a dance recital when I suddenly yelled for my mom to stop the car. It was ten o clock in the mid summer, and the street we were driving on cut through two very large fields, which happened to be inhabited by thousands of stars on earth. I grabbed my best friends hand, and we dashed through the field, until we were in the center, at which point we both stopped and hugged each other taking in all the dazzling lights around us. To this day that's one of the best memories I have. Thank you for reminding me. ^^ <3

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RELIGION is a story
PHILOSOPHY is a story
FAME is a story

A STORY IS THE ONLY THING WORTH LIVING FOR
a story is the only thing worth dying for
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