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Acoustic thoughts beating through my head...
echoing every lie you ever said.
wishing I'd never let you in,
though I'm sure there's a greater sin.
baby, you hurt me, you broke me,
but never will you again.

listening to every song I fell for...
whispers of those three vicious words...
whispers of that circumstantial "forever"...
whispers of all those damn things you said but didn't know,
everywhere I look to is the same ole you.

but never will you again.
©2008-2009 ~the-depth-of-love
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I just found this in a *BOX*.

This one has a rhythm, unlike most other things I write.. so that's probably the only reason I posted it. Enjoy.

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:iconpendulousrose:
I really like the rhythm and the tone to this piece. I don't know how to explain it but it drew me in. One of the lines really stuck out to me too-- "Whispers of all those damn things you said but didn't know." Nice work. =)

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